I need some critique on this picture. It was made with Drawing Hands Art Studio. What's right with it and what's wrong with it? It will be used for another project.
Critics wanted!!
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It's a great picture!
The only thing I notice,is that the left eye is a bit darker than the right 1.......but I'm on my laptop,so it could be also my screen that things doesn't display properly......
The only thing I notice,is that the left eye is a bit darker than the right 1.......but I'm on my laptop,so it could be also my screen that things doesn't display properly......
The lighting was coming from the left side, that's why the eye and side of face are darker. PC- how did you know it was me?
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I knew it was you as well.janiedriver said:
Indeed the lighting does look correct with a strong one-point light source. In color portrature, it would not fine as there would be a colored shadow and less contrast in that area. But since you are using black and white medium here, a little fill in that area might help. Try the tone that is in the triangular patch behind your nose (known as Short Lighting or Rembrandt Lighting). Perhaps a shade darker. You will have better contrast between your eyebrow and that shadow. Should make your that eye look larger and in proportion to the other. Mind you it's not bad... just a preference.
Never used this proggie. But your work is nicely done Janie.
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From your other post,Starting to celebrate.janiedriver said:
I should have left my post but it just seemed out of place.
Not really out of place. I was interested in what you had to say.
Nope, it was all done from scratch. I reall like this program!
